Advancing AI Literacy Lessons


Revising with AI: Strengthening Your Narrative

English | 9-12
Duration: 60 minutes
Author: Christopher Walker, Computer Science Teacher

In this lesson, students use AI writing tools to revise and improve their personal narratives by seeking targeted feedback on clarity, organization, and emotional impact. They compare their original drafts to AI-assisted revisions, identifying what changed and why. Through reflection and discussion, students consider the benefits and limitations of AI in creative writing, including how bias or lack of nuance can affect tone and representation. This lesson reinforces responsible AI use and helps students develop strategies for maintaining their voice while leveraging technology.

Lesson Objectives

  • Revise personal narratives using AI feedback while preserving voice and intent.
  • Compare original and AI-revised drafts to identify improvements and limitations.
  • Reflect on the ethical and practical implications of using AI in writing.
  • Evaluate AI feedback for signs of bias or assumptions and decide whether to accept or reject suggestions.

Essential Questions

  • How does AI feedback influence the way we revise our stories?
  • What responsibilities do writers have when using AI tools to ensure their stories remain authentic and unbiased?
  • How can writers use AI responsibly without losing their voice?